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probably will not change anything, but you can fight ... By the way, today, Thursday, and so the analysis. A analysis of how each known is the struggle: from making any mistakes, stylistic, emoticons, but also a Mary Sue. Today, the fight will triple ...
Grandma Slytherin
name is Kimbelie Slytherin. Throughout his life, I knew who I was.
It is quite contrary to the practices aŁtoreczkowymi! 
My mother, Aurelia Slytherin, famous for its extraordinary beauty and inteliencji, and my father, Remi Slytherin, właścićel Miendzynarodowego magic bank, never gave me forget about making wonder if he had to fight the crisis? But I did not go to Hogwarts. Parents afraid to let go of me, so up to England.
So much is heard about these recent actions against prostitutes ...
founder Slytherin house, my praprapra (and yes even with eight times PRA) grandfather, fled the country after August pokłucił jag of Gryffindor. To Japan.
There could say "jag" at will, without fear that it will be understood by others.
father arranged with Dumbledore, and I'll be at the ceremony of the allocation, but it would be ironic if I did not went to Slytherin.
bet?
founded long strand brown hair behind her ear. She was pretty, she knew about it.
Kimbeliepedia.
the English had no problems. All my life spent in a big castle where the parents were not the Japanese. In total, she could not even Japanese.
watching anime with a teacher.
Suddenly the compartment door opened with a bang. In them was a group of people. At about her age. Closest to the door stood a tall boy, certainly, a noble beauty. He had platinum hair and gray eyes. Consisted of an average girl beauty. The girl was staring at him, his watery eyes.
eyes after a while chlupotów spłynęły her face and clothes.
Kimberlie felt that it runs out of breath when the boy was looking at her.
Killing vision has always been so fascinating.
Although it was pretty cool beauty is the eyes gazed at her with an incredible warmth and emotion. What emotions did not know that jescze.
is going to be wild, Interval orgy?
- I'm Draco Malfoy. I've never seen you before.
- As millions and millions of millions of people in this world - I said. Kimberlie
resembled ghost in her house, Slytherin prapraprababcia, Victoria. She was just as pretty and young (granny Slytherin slashed his wrists as a result of madness, so Kimberlie did not even want to find out what happened to this spirit.)
And before you a new terror criminals - Grandma Slytherin!
"I'm Emyryta Wilson. The spirit of Hogwarts
ever improving those names. I feel that creativity aŁtorki in relation to the names will not soon pass.
" I am Professor McGonagall. Miss Slytherin? "Asked Professor McGonagall.
" Yes, professor. "She replied Kimberlie.
"will be assigned as the first lady. But this is obviously just a formality. No ba. Nobody imagines Slytherin in Gryffindor * touch wood *
Tiara only said:" Aaa ... The pure blood not seen here for ages! I would be for nothing if I were you allocated elsewhere Eng to Slytherin! " Kimbelie After a while she got a bucket of water and a mop.
Suddenly there was a cry of:" Voldemort has returned! It's her! It will be bad! " Harry began to tear his shirt, like a memorable Rejtan.
applause died down. Suddenly the voice of another student sounded through the hall: "O God! Shut up, Potter! Nabierałeś us already 4 times and none of them proved to be true!"
The hall resounded with laughter. Now the director of przmówił: "Miss Slytherin, Slytherin table is there. I apologize for my student."
This is just the Potter. He thinks that, as it is famous, that's all he is allowed!
Dormitory C girls
Regina Wilkins 4 years 5 years Pansy Parkinson Jane
Appergine 6 years 5 years Slytherin Kimberlie Elizabeth Berg
five years
Kim and Pansy in one room. aŁtorki are clever!
Regina Wilkins, even anokertyczna, low, pale blonde. She had thin straight hair and big eyes in a very beautiful face.
For who can match the Kimbelie-all?
Appergine Jane, the oldest but also probably the stupidest. Black, thick hair. Related to the sloppy ponytail. Broad face and bushy eyebrows sprawiały not friendly impression. (...) Last girl, Eliza, had a bed next to her. Immediately I spoke to Kimberlie. There may have been especially nice. But quite bearable. Mouse-colored hair, nor skinny nor fat. But nice. Already first evening found out about each other.
Okay, we have a distinction between "like" and "hate." That's when the battle in the jelly?
Pansy told Jane all the time and, staring at Pansy, Regina that this year, Draco certainly will come to her room at night.
decided to die and haunt her.
"I know why"
Ke?
first lesson, elixirs with their home supervisor, Professor Snape. I immediately loved it. Reminded her of her father.
After class approached him and asked if he could refer to him as 'Dad'.
Draco grabbed her by the hand and pulled her toward the exit. They walked for a long time when Draco finally pulled her to an empty class.
Operation "Rape" has begun!
"What are you .." Kimberlie did not manage even answered by the opinion, when Draco podósł her and sat on one of the benches. Zaczol to kiss her. Kimberlie wanted to push him away. To say that they can not. After all, he had a girlfriend!
- Eebac toooo - Draco said, kissing her all the time.
But the desire to was too big. Her hands and arms. Everywhere. Cloning
hands in full readiness.
It was grander than anything I've done with Pansy! Although as early as the summer got pregnant. "
" WHAT? ", Kimberlie frightened. What would have happened if not for a ringtone?
that occurred too. From those hands. They were everywhere!
" I do not know how to happened. We believed. Her aunt, healer, abortion, and promised not to tell anyone anything. "
Abortion! Abortion! Where is Dumbledore?
Greetings Kimberlie
Aurelia Nyrazja Slytherin Name
FAIL!
"Oh. This DobryZiomeczek Potter." Wanted to go through the door, but Harry stopped her hand. "So you're a Slytherin, even pretty. I saw that you go somewhere with Malfoy. What did you do? Repeat this with me?", He stroked her hand on his cheek.
Harry likes people who are in any way connected with Asia.
placed his hand on his chest. Still holding her hand. His hand drew her to him and objoł her waist. He kissed her neck and she could not do anything! His free hand went under her blouse.
Harry had to de-stress after a few years ripping sanctimonious.
Potter's Hand slid under her skirts. "Leave it, Potter!" That was unexpected. In the doorway stood Draco to sowiarni leveled the wand at Potter.
door hit the wall with a bang. Through the windows we could hear the rain and lightning. The light went out, and alternately shone.
Potter's hitting spell straight on the forehead. Headshot!
Kimberlie, I was ... so scared of you. As you heard we were in the hallway with Parkinson i. .. the rest does not matter what we were doing. I left her and zaczol you seek. - Although I had some problems with the assumption of trousers, but ..
Comment:
Firstly, it's in your story is quite a lot of (obvious) spelling errors, such as: wogule - writes: In general, najleprzą - the best. I will not write in ... I know that everyone can make mistakes, but to write 'najleprzą'? Besides, the last descendant of Slytherin and Voldemort was impossible that anyone was still alive by the name of Slytherin. But your story is fiction, so do not be picking on ... Snape saying "Parkinson, do not rape my students here!" ? Ah ... A little weird. Well, Draco. Somehow too quickly rolled to this action ... I think that Draco does not discover his feelings against someone he barely knows, and I do not think he felt responsible for the pregnancy of Pansy (which is also a little ... weird.) Generally, it does not write bad (except for those few errors ort), the idea it is OK, just share a little bit too fast is taking place.
aŁtorki Answer:
chiał just say that I do not live in Poland and went to school in poland. What is the action you're right. A little too fast. But this is my first opko. And as for Draco then read on and find out why it was showing in August and shows affection. Read more: P Well, you see? All clear!
"It's confusing. Wgmatwany In a Dark Lord." Wgmatwaj me yet.
"You mean Uncle Voldemort? Relative of my father?" Kimberlie blurted out as if talking about any other member of her family.
Uncle Voldemort is quite as scary as the LORD.
"And it's him!" Cursed kid, which he first picked up the body. The poor uncle. Pżerzył is hard. "
* looks at last sentence * Probably. ..
tears already splashed with her chin ...
been lost on the way to the eyeball.
Minoł tyzien.
I must learn it in English.
And he kissed her. It was such a nice pocałunek.Nie such as the Draco, when was ready to sleep with him, just a gentle kiss.
Draco predator. Suddenly
zaczol it harder to push himself and his kisses were getting stronger. Kimberlie knew what it carried. And that's not supposed to be Blaise, nor so quickly.
child by a kiss! Now we know why Pansy was pregnant.
"Blaise! Say no! Even think about it", then went to his dormitory. The union had no chance. Now to know that ...
It can ... Potter?
Slip * ki
is a blog whose main character is a blog Ginny.Mam hope you like it, and assessment will be fair.
So do we start?
Ginny was lying on the bed in his room, the windows in the rain drummed szyby.Ginny heard something like drums in the windows was Hedwig, Harry's owl.
bębniących drummed to the rhythm of raindrops.
Ginny she let her inside and gave her a great delicacy for sów.Otworzyła red envelope and began reading
And where, "says Ginny?"
Mrs. Weasley outgrown its capabilities made walnut cake with cyferką 15th
10 percent of the power for Mrs. Weasley.
Harry picked up the first gift was a gift from góry.Był Ginny, namely, they were red shorts with hearts.
Such hackneyed ... gifts
rest was already pretty decent.
Normally, there aŁtorka would give the slip to the censorship of * k.
topos baked potato
Heroes: Victoria Regina
Hortes - peer Tom Riddle. The main protagonist of the story. Victoria is beautiful, a little lost girl, only support located at a young Riddle'u, with whom friendship already from the first class at Hogwarts.
friendship at first sight.
Victoria has a pale face, black shoulder-length hair and equally dark eyes, covered with long eyelashes. It is very variable, but usually despise the people.
wears black and likes glany gothic costumes. At night, listen Nightwish and attends classes at the Finnish ...
Tom Riddle - a cold and indifferent to others. The only exception is Victoria, which burned Volume [?] Hidden feelings?
Victoria will have to devote much time to warm up his beloved.
has dark hair, black eyes and a cool look. Leads the band of his "followers", consisting of students ambitious, violent and in need of defense.
Can this be considered a cult?
In the future, wants to take over the world and gain immortality.
What an ambition!
Nicolas Largus Rowdy - Victoria's boyfriend. By nature, very explosive and prone to fights. Nick and Miss Hortes's not connecting with each other, in addition to the common arguments and decisions of the family.
* dead * Photo of Ben Moody of Evanescence kill me>.
Nick is explosive and extremely jealous of the beautiful and popular Victoria, why not leave it on the step.
wonder where planted wiretaps?
has blond hair and dull blue eyes.
has long had them whet ...
Despite his obvious stupidity, but it is a great guy who is afraid of most of the students at Hogwarts.
Small = Stupid. Remember the future.
Sokaris Febron Hortes - cunning, the elder brother by one year, Victoria. Wikipedia mentions
something about Fiebrosławie. And to me it was associated with the disease.
is cynical and sincere, the sister calls even brazenly, but at heart very worried about her.
Victoria has przekichane in life. Scary guy, terrible brother, a terrible friend ...
Low, eleven year old girl became the King's Cross station with his suitcase, mommy and daddy.
Putting parents on one scale with a suitcase seems to be so unusual.
was like a hundred little girls, moms and dads with this station, after which cats wandered.
and suitcases, do not forget.
But it is precisely at this unassuming little girl will be the story.
About her and her suitcase.
Victoria stood next to his mother and held the hands of the black, Egyptian Mau cat.
He unfortunately did not have suitcases.
had a boy 12 years and was the elder brother of Victoria. Was the boy
suitcase turned out to be?
Suddenly there was a patter of feet and the cat escaped from the grip of his young owner.
-Midnight, come back! - She cried Victoria and ran for a cat.
A dog named Midday?
Suddenly ... BUUM!
terrorist attack prevented the arrival of the train to Hogwarts. As it turned out, a bomb was hidden in a suitcase.
Victoria was on the ground as long. The pale boy, with whom he collided, stopped and looked up at the girl. So lovely creatures ever seen in my life.
- Incredible! Geotrupes vernalis! - Shouted out, taking the body of Victoria's small beetle.
-Also I have a cat - said the boy first time after their meeting.
Snogging 'the dog' I have seen, but 'the cat'?
His voice was cold, but it could hear a note of warmth.
Oh, those peppermints ...
When going through the corridors, it turned out that all the bands are already occupied. Only at the end of the train saw a nearly empty space. He sat there, only the pale boy, in which she fell.
Well, who would have thought?! By the way, why she fell in it!
"I'm Victoria Hortus - said Victoria.
-A me ... Tom Riddle - Tom ran through his face barely visible shadow.
Since childhood he knew how to behave, to bring an aura of gloom and mystery.
In a further conversation with Tom, Victoria was that he grew up in a Muggle orphanage, and that Dumbledore had told him about his true origins.
From time to time, Dumbledore appeared in various orphanages and naigrywał with children. He did not know, however, that this will lead to such a great project which was to lead a school facility.
-Ah ... Could you go out for a while? - She asked. - I want to change and ...
-I will not look - Tom interrupted her and covered his eyes with his hands. Victoria looked after him suspiciously, but decided to change. * humming merrily under her breath * I see your boobs ... * Hums merrily under her breath *
Pierwszoroczniacy boats sailed across the lake, as was the custom, they were led by a professor of Defense through the hall entrance to one of the classrooms where they received a few minutes to correct his appearance.
had to look good before they can defend themselves against a professor of defense.
-Here I have a little problem. Sly, mysterious, independent ... I know where the best fit ...
A tiara is read out from the last theft of candy from the cupboard of their parents.
Since my meeting with Riddle a few years passed. No matter how much, it's important that I started my sixth year at Hogwarts
mysterious mystery leads us to search for a mysterious mathematical equation, which we can explore this mysterious secret.
Tom Riddle was for me a very close person, and many students assumed that in the end you'll be a couple, but it did not happen.
We only had a child, no big deal ...
moaned softly at the sight, but I sent him a wry smile. Nick was [sadly] ... my boyfriend? I do not know why I was with him. Upset me more than my own brother.
quickly clenched my corset, feeling that I have trouble catching your breath.
better now - I thought.
Nick was perhaps the most blunt and largest osiłkiem, What I saw in my life.
But that his suitcase ...
ciemnoblond had her hair cut off at the hedgehog, a bit grumpy face and certainly huge muscles.
But his suitcase ... * Sighs *
train moved. Nick sat down opposite me and pulled out a comic book in which he plunged. Pathetic ...
Hey, I've also read comics! Excuse me!
Just remembered that I was prefect of the chief and I have to kick a little work.
main character without any position higher than the rest of society? Forgive me.
preparing to quarrel, said the blunt Riddle'ai black eyes, blue eyes of Nick. Both daggers briefly glances.
nienaostrzonymi Nick with his knife he had no chance.
-What do they think I'm a bitch from the Middle Ages? - Burst.
- Well, you know - said Tom - These corsets ...
I did not have quite the appetite. He sat and stared at his baked potato.
Duel in the eyes. What a rough game!
snorted i wbiłam widelec w ziemniaka, który rozpadł się na kilka części.
Po chwili pomogłam sobie moim ostrym wzrokiem.
zakończyłam tą głupią rozmowę i zajęłam się swoim ziemniakiem.
Topos pieczonego ziemniaka w literaturze...
-I ostatnie ogłoszenie na dziś – powiedział Dippet, na co większość uczniów odetchnęło z ulgą.
Jak sądzicie, co to będzie? Nowi uczniowie?
– Pragnę powitać tą dziesiątkę uczniów, którzy przyjechali z Beauxbatons. Mam nadzieję, że będą felt here, as in old school. On this occasion at Hogwarts will be organized ball. It will be held until October. And now I wish you good night.
The Beauxbatons students this month will have to feel like not in their former school.
cocked his head slightly, between us now only centimeters. Embraced his neck, and Tom kissed me on the lips. Suddenly there was a sharp hiss. He jumped up and grabbed his heart.
Return of Terrorists?
from aŁtorki:
Recently I got quite a rude comment at the prologue. This one wrote that he did not like my blog. So good. Of course I'll write more, but if someone really did not like my style, etc., let me say it straight and not wrapped in cotton. * trying to recover from the shock * I did not return bluzgów!
I am so devastated that I decide not further analyzed. Stylistic errors there is not much, not spelling and syntax are kept on their feet. Congratulations, he is the third blog, which I finish in mid-analyze ...
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